When writhing a procedure essay you should concentrate on the following points:
a) Use the imperative form
b) Use linking words like after that, next, then, finally.
Sunday, November 8, 2009
Reflection 2
To write a story a student should follow a couple of steps:
a) You should first think about the topic that was given
b) Try to imagine the topic that was written
c) Start to write what happened before the most important thing in the story and after.
That everything will come to you.
a) You should first think about the topic that was given
b) Try to imagine the topic that was written
c) Start to write what happened before the most important thing in the story and after.
That everything will come to you.
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Last summer
Last summer I went with my cousins to the sea for our biggest sail together.
We woke up in the morning it was Tuesday we arranged our belonging in the bags and started our cars we hooked our jet-ski the hook in our cars. We departed around 9 o’clock and we had to drive for around 400Km which well take around 3 hours. In the way we met a friend of my father that had a lot of boats for rent. We asked him to give as a boat that can take up to 15 people. After we rented the boat and hooked it up we continued our trip. We arrived in the planed time it was around 10 o’clock. WE unhooked the boat and the jet-skies to start our best summer trip ever. We at first planed to play with the jet-skies but my father insisted on going to fish in the deep sea So in the end we went to fish. We prepared the equipment and started the fishing and while we were fishing we heard a loud voice when we looked out of the boat we saw a large shark so our father told as to switch of the engine and pull up the rods. After a couple of minutes the shark dispread and suddenly we saw it at the rear of the boat hitting the boat with his head so my father went to get the harpoon which was attached to a gun that was specially made to fire in the water he shot it at the shark and killed it in an instant. We pulled the shark out and oh my god it was the biggest shark I ever saw in my life. In the end we went home and prepared the shark and it was almost a perfect meal.
I hope that you enjoyed my story
We woke up in the morning it was Tuesday we arranged our belonging in the bags and started our cars we hooked our jet-ski the hook in our cars. We departed around 9 o’clock and we had to drive for around 400Km which well take around 3 hours. In the way we met a friend of my father that had a lot of boats for rent. We asked him to give as a boat that can take up to 15 people. After we rented the boat and hooked it up we continued our trip. We arrived in the planed time it was around 10 o’clock. WE unhooked the boat and the jet-skies to start our best summer trip ever. We at first planed to play with the jet-skies but my father insisted on going to fish in the deep sea So in the end we went to fish. We prepared the equipment and started the fishing and while we were fishing we heard a loud voice when we looked out of the boat we saw a large shark so our father told as to switch of the engine and pull up the rods. After a couple of minutes the shark dispread and suddenly we saw it at the rear of the boat hitting the boat with his head so my father went to get the harpoon which was attached to a gun that was specially made to fire in the water he shot it at the shark and killed it in an instant. We pulled the shark out and oh my god it was the biggest shark I ever saw in my life. In the end we went home and prepared the shark and it was almost a perfect meal.
I hope that you enjoyed my story
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